Wednesday, June 29, 2011

Can you give your opinions/criticism on my song I wrote?

"Copyright Infrigement"

(Verse One)
Starting out with the past
At the time I thought it'll last
Before you came along
Your man was my own
That was when I had respect
Didn't expect
To be left
All alone
With him gone
To be your own

(Hook)
Now you act as if like
You had copyright
While I was Mr. Watson
And I was wanting to stop and
Claim your invention
In your kitchen
Stealing your ingredients

(Pre-Chorus)
This is neither or the time and place
To try and start some silly hate
But I just need to remind you
I can fine you
For what you're trying to do

(Chorus)
I'm the one who patened this
Now you're trying to claim the relationship
That is called copyright infringement
And you're trying to be all in it

(Verse Two)
I don't know who you are
But you can't go too far
Cause we all know
You can't go
Anywhere you're told
So you follow
Wherever I go
I fly solo
I think he does too
Not with you
I'm telling the truth

(Pre-Chorus)
This is neither or the time and place
To try and start some silly hate
But I just need to remind you
I can fine you
For what you're trying to do

(Chorus)
I'm the one who patened this
Now you're trying to claim the relationship
That is called copyright infringement
And you're trying to be all in it

(Bridge)
I invented the cure for Brundlefly
I'm the one who came up with healthier McDonald fries
I created the Atansoff-Berry computer
I'm the one who came up with school tutors

(Pre-Chorus)
This is neither or the time and place
To try and start some silly hate
But I just need to remind you
I can fine you
For what you're trying to do

(Chorus)
I'm the one who patened this
Now you're trying to claim the relationship
That is called copyright infringement
And you're trying to be all in it

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